Making Sense.
New events at times can mystify logical minds,
Turn topsy-turvy accepted norms., toss sky-high
Respectable long held conclusions, and jumble
Normal routine until , irretrievably, it is tumbled.
Change in events scramble the unprepared brain.
Life appears altered, time patterns never the same.
Confusion reigns, until answers start making sense
Of the questioning "whys" which storm relentlessly
Over unquestioned acceptance, - - - and then blast
Apart reliance on conventional views, - - very fast.
At last simple clarity reappears, and rises above
Any doubt, - you realize you have fallen in love.
Raj Arumugam
Love your series of love poems, Fay...the have a freshness and authenticity that is rare in much of love poetry on the internet... And you say: At last simple clarity reappears, and rises above/Any doubt, - you realize you have fallen in love. - and what happens after? Clarity disappears again, once in love!
Love your series of love poems, Fay...the have a freshness and authenticity that is rare in much of love poetry on the internet... And you say: At last simple clarity reappears, and rises above/Any doubt, - you realize you have fallen in love. - and what happens after? Clarity disappears again, once in love!
Tribhawan Kaul
We are alwyas mistified by the turn of events sometimes defying logic. Love is one of those events. Elegantly written.
We are alwyas mistified by the turn of events sometimes defying logic. Love is one of those events. Elegantly written.
Karin Anderson
Such a romantic and beautiful conclusion Fay and I Loved "turn tropsy-turvy accepted norms" toss sky-high respectable long held conclusions"....and all of this wonderfully crafted poem Fay.
Such a romantic and beautiful conclusion Fay and I Loved "turn tropsy-turvy accepted norms" toss sky-high respectable long held conclusions"....and all of this wonderfully crafted poem Fay.
kath
Wonderful inking Fay!!!! You totally capture the rapture of new love!!!! :) kath xxxxxxxx
Wonderful inking Fay!!!! You totally capture the rapture of new love!!!! :) kath xxxxxxxx
carol
lov the blast fay you have it right on
lov the blast fay you have it right on
Susan Jarvis
An insightful, poetical view of this age old condition, and I especially like; 'Change in events scramble the unprepared brain' - how very true. :)
An insightful, poetical view of this age old condition, and I especially like; 'Change in events scramble the unprepared brain' - how very true. :)
RAJ NANDY
FAY , Both the photo and your lovely lines create an atmosphere of love ! -Raj
FAY , Both the photo and your lovely lines create an atmosphere of love ! -Raj
love this beautiful piece Fay ~the last 2 lines "hugged" my heart~