Just been dreaming up
a bit of fun on a warm
September afternoon.

September Sizzle.

I found me
a patch
of secluded
grass
in a dream of
a field
high out of town,

- - - - then - - - -

slipped out of
my jeans
in natural
fashion
and topless
lay down to
allow
a little
September
sizzle

to properly

colour me

brown.

Shihab
Fine natural freedom is divine

Shihab
Fine natural freedom is divine

Simply Bono Razek
brilliant & funny !~thank you I needed a break from sadness~blessings.

Munia Khan
He he he he Thanks for making my day Fay with this delightful verse n indeed the funny image lolol...Love this:-)

sonetta
ha-ha, takes one to know one...LOL

Fay Slimm
Ha ha - - spot on Sonya - - how did you guess ? ? ?

sonetta
i know why you posted that picture...to stop us from imagining you in the buff....lol...nice try!! (or does the sun make you hairy too? lol)

Nikunj
of course the photo was taken after the tan...

kath
A sizzling write that made me laff like a monkey!!! :) kath xxx

Lynda Robson
Very funny picture and your poem does it justice, well versed Fay xx

Leslie Alexis
@ the picture... STOP APING AROUND!!!!!!!!!! about the poem. lovely! made me smile

Ency Bearis
Nice concept the poem really sizzled in September

PrEmJi PrEmJi
back to nature... one can feel that... again laugh too.....