After seeing this picture the following
words came into my head as the lady
was looking pensively disheartened.

Tudor Love-Note.

Dearest,
my Knight,
love-lorn and ageing this heart
as I wait.

Undeclared,
thy love remains stonily silent
has coldness
of granite which surrounds me
each day.

Speak thee, kind Sire.

Sendest
word to me soon of thy tender
affection,
or swooning, I mayest regret
thy part
in not keeping heartbreak
at bay.

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Karin Anderson
This is written with such empathy Fay with the eloquent style of yesteryear you do so well. I think the picture is so interesting. Sometimes in a magazine there is a contest with a photo similar to this, where one has to write what they think the person is saying. I am sure yours would win the competition!
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Scarlett Angel
exquisite piece Fay...so beautifully written
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Ency Bearis
An excellent classic poem.... and I agree with Shakespeares - those were the days
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Ken e Hall
Very nice Fay the words fit perfect ..though I think she has dropped an ear ring ...ooow Tuder times could she not loose her head? loved it as usual regards
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Simply Bono Razek
how beautiful this is ! I believe you've described this lady to the " T "~ nice / very nice. thank you for your recent comments they're most appreciated~take care.
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Nikunj
nice expressions , I like the flow and the context ...though I donno much about Tudor ...
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Sandra Martyres
This is brilliant Fay...I love the words, the style and ofcourse teh strong Tudor flavour...
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carol
love that time in history your words compliment the picture
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