Our Star.
We had reached such high
romantic places.
but pressures
of life meant
we couldn't make it.
I cannot erase you though
from my heart,
nor do I want to
and that's
the hard part.
What reaches the soul stays
there it seems.
our love
will forever
colour my dreams.
While we had time our star
burned so bright
it will take
light years
to vanish outright.
Simply Bono Razek
such beauty-Fay~~wonderful write
such beauty-Fay~~wonderful write
yelena
This poem goes straight into my heart...Amazing, Fay, perfect touching words...
This poem goes straight into my heart...Amazing, Fay, perfect touching words...
T A Ramesh
Love continues forever!
Love continues forever!
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Once again, I say, "The heart cannot be silent!" I have known a love like this... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Once again, I say, "The heart cannot be silent!" I have known a love like this... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Raj Arumugam
forgetting is difficult indeed...
forgetting is difficult indeed...
Leslie Alexis
and two shall become one... always the case.
and two shall become one... always the case.
David Taylor
beautiful and positive all that happens shapes our future
beautiful and positive all that happens shapes our future
nimal dunuhinga
It's really beautiful 'while we had time our star burn so bright.' Fay knows her color of dreams!
It's really beautiful 'while we had time our star burn so bright.' Fay knows her color of dreams!
carol
so true fay it stays in the soul
so true fay it stays in the soul
sonetta
this tugs at the heart.....you are right, it seems one cannot erase love....you can distance yourself from it, you can try to forget it but it will always remain "there"....
this tugs at the heart.....you are right, it seems one cannot erase love....you can distance yourself from it, you can try to forget it but it will always remain "there"....
kath
Wow-ee Fay! A stellar poem of such artistry deserves long years in the spotlight! Kath xxx
Wow-ee Fay! A stellar poem of such artistry deserves long years in the spotlight! Kath xxx
Susan Jarvis
Fay, this is a deeply moving, heart felt and beautiful poem that has left me with a tear in my eye. The closing stanza is hauntingly perfect, and I can relate to every word.
Fay, this is a deeply moving, heart felt and beautiful poem that has left me with a tear in my eye. The closing stanza is hauntingly perfect, and I can relate to every word.
Sandra Martyres
O Fay this is both a beautiful and very moving write... Bookmarked
O Fay this is both a beautiful and very moving write... Bookmarked
The poem was short but it pushed me back in my own memories and to those painful moments which I had spent crying when my love had left me...Beautifully written poem so full of emotions that every word seems to carry a heart of its own...I can say no more this peice is now one of my most favouriates...so simple yet so much effective Fay...