Tidal Sound.

Ground shakes
as pressured waves force more reverberation.

Before long
tide takes sound for another shore-song.

Water weight
trapping air, roars in great anticipation.

Waves break
over-fall gradation and race accelerates.

Loud boom
crash cracks rockface in huge white spume.

Tidal sound
grinds into groundswell and then re-bounds.

Awesome sight
everlasting melody repeated day and night.

Simply Bono Razek
a spectacular display of a write Fay ~wet & wild ! :)

Nikunj
your images are so beautiful and realistic that one wonders if he is reading a poem or watching a tide soar in the ocean's nerves. your words and verses are so fine that it keeps the learning curve steep for the readers ...your pems have a perpetuity in them ..

Sandra Martyres
You capture the the atmosphere of the of tides and the waves remarably well in this awesome write. I love teh presentation too Fay.

Karin Anderson
Awesome poem sight in your last stanza and awesome poem too Fay. Having two words in the first sentences introduced me to such majestic and amazing images. I too felt I was there and the sound was so dominant too!

Ency Bearis
It seems its a good place to meditate with the dazzling background sound of it

carol
i wish i could be there it sounds exciting

robyn selters
...your concluding lines complete an evocative description of the awesome power depicted in the wonderful scene of crashing waves on the shore...