anushmadhu poems
Love is a magic ball
Love is a magic ball..,
It cannot be played
In any court or ground;
Coach and rules
As well does not exist
In this game-Still,
Scores are given,
Sometimes you win…
And anytime you may loose,
But you are the umpire.
Love is a compact disc
With sharp edges;
It spread music
When you emit
Along the micro lines.
When virus breaks away
the hearts sway
with hemorrhage.
Love is a personified energy
Of mind-set and thoughts;
When it is meditated
It brings a success - else
It crucifies the nexus.
Oh Golden yellowish beach,
You never fade away
As long as lovers do
Celebrate on your shore lines;
Counting grain sizes
of the sand in beach
Is not achievable task,
As well the sorrows
And the pleasures
In the game of love too’;
The lovers may go away
But the LOVE never fades away
From the hearts.
hats off!!
Smash !!! great poet, its passionate and sense with love ....it is true love never fade as its had linkage to heart to heart .......as virus…….superb keep script with your magical words
So much wisdom in this well crafted poem on love and the imagery of the magic ball so apt. Your final stanza melted my heart...
I love this write ~love leaves its mark upon our hearts~thank you for your kind remark~be safe.
don't need a crystal ball to see all the magic in this beautiful poem of love, love that never is lost.
magic!
A unique and very poignant poem.......I will make dis my poem of the day....
reads like a mini thesaurus on love .. reads smooth and flows like a breeze ...true love is the sigma where you are the part and sum as well..it stays and doesn't ever fade away ..
Anush....this is grand !!!! A fadeless poem ...kudos :)
In this fascinating poem, you attempt to describe the indescribable - LOVE. I like all your metaphors, though your ''Magic ball' and your Golden yellowish beach' are particularly eloquent. Your final triplet sums it all up perfectly. LOVE IS. Great poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Great last stanza
Indeed love never fades it stays in the heart forever... really enjoyed this Anushmadhu... thanks!
Love is a magic ball..,,with your magic pen you wrote a romantic poem with so much passion. it's a lovely poem with your romantic words .poet its well written and excellent.please keep writing i love your poem. intelligence poet.
lovely! i like the end :)
thoroughly enjoyed! good content and well written. tfs.. john
looks like the magic ball is in your court !love ,beautifully portrayed in a very sprightly manner !eventually the last few lines brings out the essence of love which leaves an heartache or fulfillment !