take me to the ocean
take me to the ocean
where my thoughts may drift free
take me to a faraway land
only the mind can see
there i shall paint the land
of how i think the world could be
and i will live there
where there is only peace
yelena
Peace is a key word here..I wish I could live there, too..
Peace is a key word here..I wish I could live there, too..
La Finita
Beatifully written. I love this one, Carol
Beatifully written. I love this one, Carol
jinjahman
more than noble aspirations described so elegantly
more than noble aspirations described so elegantly
Bob Blackwell
Nice thoughts, it is good to dream, for without either hopes or dreams .......nothing happens that's new.
Nice thoughts, it is good to dream, for without either hopes or dreams .......nothing happens that's new.
Ency Bearis
must be a nice place with such peace
must be a nice place with such peace
ShyWolf
Mmm dreamy I would like to find that faraway land too -
Mmm dreamy I would like to find that faraway land too -
premji premji
took me to the ocean of poetry.....thanks......
took me to the ocean of poetry.....thanks......
nimal dunuhinga
You take your precious brush and the paints Yes,there's a place call 'No man's island'.
You take your precious brush and the paints Yes,there's a place call 'No man's island'.
Joy
wow! Great write! I would love to be taken to the ocean where my thoughts may drift free!
wow! Great write! I would love to be taken to the ocean where my thoughts may drift free!
send me directions, please.....