Raining A Yesterday.
We were an item, so very together,
we were complete.
We had it all, and our every desire
seemed always replete.
But you had changes of need then
you suddenly left.
Did you not realize I would become
so sad and bereft ?
Rainng a yesterday of tears makes
hurt soak today's door.
With emotions I never encountered
or imagined before.
Munia Khan
Let the sadness wash away the tear drops and take away the pain....Wonderful verse Fay.
Let the sadness wash away the tear drops and take away the pain....Wonderful verse Fay.
T A Ramesh
Well weaved poem about enjoyment and sadness!
Well weaved poem about enjoyment and sadness!
carol
a hurt so deep
a hurt so deep
Sandra Martyres
A very emotional write with excellent imagery Fay...the rhyming couplets emphasise the sadness
A very emotional write with excellent imagery Fay...the rhyming couplets emphasise the sadness
sonetta
luv the halting rhythm which emphasis the pathos....
luv the halting rhythm which emphasis the pathos....
kath
a pour down of sad, sodden emotions - just lovely Fay! :) Kath xxx
a pour down of sad, sodden emotions - just lovely Fay! :) Kath xxx
magnolia
a sad piece, the couplets do it. The title brill. Maggie
a sad piece, the couplets do it. The title brill. Maggie
'Raining a yesterday of tears makes hurt soak today's door..' - very original and memorable lines. Enjoyed this poem, Fay, thanks for sharing:)