would you know

would you know
if i fell out of love with you
your kisses no longer mattered
and the moon paled
would you know
if i stopped hugging so much
and the sun didnt come up
would you

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ShyWolf
I hope he will know Carol - for too many partners love becomes just a habit...good question
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Fay Slimm
What an original question to ask a loved one - - you have it tagged so poetically too Carol - - a great goodmorning read - - thank you.
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Ency Bearis
an inquisitive thoughts for a soul mates to answer and charmingly presented
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Michael J. Gale
Would You know if You had composed a poem so good? Would You know? It,to all,would show. Talent is hard to hide,once well read and literally spied. Great poem!
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vijay menon
lovely poem carol
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