Corners of Dusk.

Now light sinks into hibernation rays of sunshine
become as pallid
as faded love affairs,
unhappened mystical changes then muster
for roll-call by spreading
moon's taste into the corners of dusk.

A pale crescent glow pervades the bowl of misty
crushed-velvet above,
as cool beams
from pearl moondrops bleed ice into the remains
of sunset, like a white
avalanche dusting lunar-flakes over day.

Scent of moonbeams preparing for flight ignite dark,
and sunset now conquered,
the light has to retire,
bleeding wounds seep red streaks over paling
blue as moon takes power,
for after tasting first-fruits she intends reigning.

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
So beautiful Fay...A sprit soother...a treasure of poetic everything good! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Nikunj
expressions that please the heart , images that steal the show and the flow that can put a young river to shame . the verses are grand and mindblowing ... 1. Moon's taste...dusk - this is really a treat to the poetic senses . a visual delight . 2.moondrops .......day.another stunning verse that would make the most poets jealous of your capabilities .... 3. the final stanza is again a master stroke of your pen that's full of creativity ...

Bob Blackwell
Your pallette is working well, the colours used to describe the autumn twilight time, like your poem are beautiful

Kevin Wells
Oh Fay! This is so sweet, Absolutely lovely imagery. Pure beauty as always. X

T A Ramesh
Juice of Nature prepared according to your taste is unique to read!

Raj Arumugam
a perfect dusk...and night is ruled by the lovely moon

mistycalpoet
amazing read from start to end... so lovely and the image is so perfect! thanks again Fay for another beautiful piece...

Scarlett Angel
this is a dream of a poem to read...such fabulous visuals conjured up from your words...:)

carol
amazing fay

Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Very nicely done, Fay...Leaving this place...All my new posts are NOT appearing on the home posting opage for peeps to see....They are all appearing on the MONTHLY ARCHIVE page where peeps like Aldo s 300 extras get tossed....I wrote Coder, but why write & post if no one but i 'm seeing it ? My Best...Frank