Love.....needs...acceptance...and declarations..
Translated from Mazhaipen by kavigar.pazhani bharathi
'Will' of House...
Your name is home of love;
The porch greets
With Jasmine fragrance ;
My thirst is trapped within
A tender coconut tree;
Dreams are painted around the shelves
And freeze in ornate toys,
My taste possesses warmth
From the stove in the kitchen.
The darkness and loneliness
Shared not only in bed
But Counting the stars too.
I could touch the
Spilling water from the well.
Despite all,
The WILL of the house is
Not with me
ritty patnaik
a very well penned poem........loneliness,yearning comes very strong in this beautiful write.
a very well penned poem........loneliness,yearning comes very strong in this beautiful write.
bogpan
Loneliness is the key word in this poem, which was closed as water well. Hopefully come true stars in bed and the scent of jasmine ...
Loneliness is the key word in this poem, which was closed as water well. Hopefully come true stars in bed and the scent of jasmine ...
Simply Bono Razek
nicely penned~beautiful ! thank you for your kind comment~be safe.
nicely penned~beautiful ! thank you for your kind comment~be safe.
Leonard Dabydeen
You truly make the house a home. A good write. Thoughtful...' I could touch the / Spilling water from the well.' Thank you for sharing. Blessings. Leonard
You truly make the house a home. A good write. Thoughtful...' I could touch the / Spilling water from the well.' Thank you for sharing. Blessings. Leonard
Alison Cassidy
A profound sense of advaita pervades this warm-hearted poem. I particularly enjoyed the lines 'The darkness and loneliness shared not only in bed but counting the stars too.' Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
A profound sense of advaita pervades this warm-hearted poem. I particularly enjoyed the lines 'The darkness and loneliness shared not only in bed but counting the stars too.' Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
La Finita
Romantic, beatifully cafted. The poem sends me to my five senses, again your magic world
Romantic, beatifully cafted. The poem sends me to my five senses, again your magic world
Saraswati
still pondering this beautiful descriptive poem...
still pondering this beautiful descriptive poem...
seedling
I can feel the peace and happiness in your house from your poem.Beautiful poem
I can feel the peace and happiness in your house from your poem.Beautiful poem
mistycalpoet
a lovely home full of memories and love... and i love jasmine always have them in my home too... ;)
a lovely home full of memories and love... and i love jasmine always have them in my home too... ;)
ju
nice images, beautiful descriptions.
nice images, beautiful descriptions.
nimal dunuhinga
A beautiful painting and I sniffed the frgrance of Jasmine of your sweet home!
A beautiful painting and I sniffed the frgrance of Jasmine of your sweet home!
Ency Bearis
an impressive poem
an impressive poem
Priyanka Bhowmick
beautifully penned
beautifully penned
Ezna Stephna
excellent poem .....Jasmine fragrance is my favor i wear that .....lovely poem with nice expression
excellent poem .....Jasmine fragrance is my favor i wear that .....lovely poem with nice expression
Sandra Martyres
An interesting write...
An interesting write...
Raj Arumugam
filled with the warmth and love of home
filled with the warmth and love of home
sridevi
wowww!!!love the ending...leaves room for so many interpretations :))
wowww!!!love the ending...leaves room for so many interpretations :))
While loneliness is the canvass, alienation seems the focal point. Beautifully captured and well crafted.