Tread Tenderly.

The lullaby shush of the evening tide seeps into the air,
sneaks around rock pools
and soothes
the beach smooth tonight.

Peeping through twilight the first star appears, exciting
the sight of two happy hearts
meeting for very first
clandestine time.

Tread tenderly lovers and maybe,when the tide turns,
your fortunate souls
will have uncovered your own tidal
yearning to return here again
and again.

magnolia
a beautiful tender poem.. Maggie x

 

poeticpiers
As delicate as nottingham lace and as fragile

David Taylor
beautiful, almost delicate, tentative and full of the promise of love.

Karin Anderson
Beautiful poetry Fay. Your first line and your picture transported me in to the tenderness of new beginnings. Your images paint the soft beauty of evening's fall so gently...

carol
only true love can return lovely fay

T A Ramesh
Nice image used in this poem makes it read again!

Nikunj
this is magical ...soft and stimulating ...full of love , passion and the imagery that steals the heart right away ....

john o'connell
a poem oozing peace. thanks for sharing.

mistycalpoet
tenderly written and soothed to the mind...

sridevi
Such a tender imagery...would love to read this poem again and again...:))Sri.

Sandra Martyres
A very tender and beautiful write Fay....I love the last verse

RAJ NANDY
Plato , influenced by Pythagoras , wrote about transmigration of the Soul !Hindu philosophy also speaks about the same ! I for one seek 'moksha' of Lord Buddha! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem ! -Raj