Thought for the day - remembering the grief
of those not able to bear a child.
Impassioned Plea.
Why, if even the smallest grass blades
hearing the passing of angels out on a mission
parade
Of whispering - - "Grow"
then burst into
birthsong,
Oh why then do not these same angels
bend a compassionate ear and hear with spiritual
favour
the impassioned plea
of this would-be mother in whispering
"Please"
then burst to assist her
birthsong ?
Karin Anderson
To have our own child is such a special gift and I remember my wish to have a child was the most important thing in the world. Your poem aches with longing and empathy and yet, some things are not meant to be. Written with just so much sensitivity Fay...
To have our own child is such a special gift and I remember my wish to have a child was the most important thing in the world. Your poem aches with longing and empathy and yet, some things are not meant to be. Written with just so much sensitivity Fay...
Susan Jarvis
Insightful, graceful and heart-touchingly special.
Insightful, graceful and heart-touchingly special.
Nikunj
as always the poem connects with life , brings in an element of superlative imagery , fine verses , smooth flow and compassionate thoughts. it again opens lines of thoughts that take the reader into your world and make them think like you have been. this is a wonderful piece , soft and touching the heart and stimulating the mind ...
as always the poem connects with life , brings in an element of superlative imagery , fine verses , smooth flow and compassionate thoughts. it again opens lines of thoughts that take the reader into your world and make them think like you have been. this is a wonderful piece , soft and touching the heart and stimulating the mind ...
Raj Arumugam
a great poem, Fay - the sort of poem only a woman can deliver with true passion and feeling. Thank you for such a deep and insightful poem.
a great poem, Fay - the sort of poem only a woman can deliver with true passion and feeling. Thank you for such a deep and insightful poem.
robyn selters
An ache like no other, such a grieved woman would say... Sometimes we do not understand fully why situations aren't always remedied... A passionate plea, well said
An ache like no other, such a grieved woman would say... Sometimes we do not understand fully why situations aren't always remedied... A passionate plea, well said
Sandra Martyres
A heartfelt piece Fay.....so very touching
A heartfelt piece Fay.....so very touching
carol
heart poem i could almost ghear her whispering
heart poem i could almost ghear her whispering
RAJ NANDY
It is rather unfortunate Fay , that in our society here , such a woman is looked down upon and called 'banja' ='barren',a curse ! Of couse adoption is a way out . -Raj
It is rather unfortunate Fay , that in our society here , such a woman is looked down upon and called 'banja' ='barren',a curse ! Of couse adoption is a way out . -Raj
a woman is given the capacity to bear and nurture children and to have this taken away is such so tragic...but because of it maybe more orphaned children have more chances of having parents......an impassioned write on a woman's angst...