Where I Am.
Where the land of my life meets the sea of destiny,
In the place of disoriented love misplacement
Is where I am and am forever kept waiting.
Where the edge of my mind scars the sides of my heart,
In the spot where unforeseen involvement on arising
Wakes the wild ocean of often floundering resolve
Is where attraction beguiles because love started.
Where the tide of the spirit rolls in waves of dejection
The castle of distracted conscience rises and opens
Doors which reach to new heights of realization
As a dire weakness appears, and a small cell
Is where my perplexity lies in reflection.
Where the unstable moon of fate glows intensely
In the perpetual dreamtime of present longing
And keeps a clear distance when my willing
Heart invites enticement's abusive agony
On the firm soil of unbending refusals
Is where I recline for my defence.
Where the need for release shows a changing soul
With a mission to fight against any giving away
The battle in conquering this weary life-style
As future star-choices have need to be made.
In the deeps of frustration sound advice
Still delays to achieve quick liberation
From this dark awesome place which
Is where I remain wholly unwhole.
Such a deep and meaningful poem Fay where you delve into your soul's need in this place of time. The pattern of the poem is so interesting and am I right in saying each word at the end of each line, becomes a sentence when read from the first to the last line of each stanza? Your talent for such a wide vocabulary is wonderful and may fate assist to bring you what you most desire...
Interesting format for in-depth imagery exploring the tensions and questions that form in one's soul
Exploration of the way of liberation for soul is beautifully expressed provoking thoughts deep in the subject further!
strong ending lady fay.
good luck..good write upp
still unwhole frustrations abound excellent fay
it is as reading a dream