5 more rewrites and I should be there.

snag (rewrite)

I settled down in a thorny bush,
drawn to its tangled dry weave.

It stung to stay, it prickled
to move and it tore to fly away.

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Leslie Alexis
hmm... is this about a relationship.. one where you're not treated well but you love the person and cant imagine life without them? good metaphor
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