if - tanka

if, by chance, you could
scratch the moonlight with your thoughts,
it would bleed silver…
could you then forge my heart's tomb
from the scent of your sweet lies?

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Sana Rose
I sigh...Lili.. ever so gently because I don't want to disturb the despondent serenity of this Tanka... if...if...if... that's what life's about...
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nimal dunuhinga
You dragged me to my best Tankist Takuboku Ishikawa And I see a far away tomb, a silver bird rests.
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