A fun-write and hope it gives a
lift to your hearts today
dear poet-friends.
Better Beware. (E)
Watch out for the wildest surf-breaker ever to hit
the shores of your salined
amorous heart.
It drags a mountainous charge of unused time
which built an extensive load from
abrasive frustration
Meets with appetite, swallows need whole, molds
fate with far-from sedate desire and creates
internal combustion.
Caught now in weed's slow undertow, it will break,
flood and submerge any recall of
perfunctory yesterdays.
No sea will contain all the infused fervour of wild
highwave's overdue roll-call for
ecstatic excitement.
Look out for the star-rated roller which suddenly
bursts into overdrive and whets expectation
with rare wanton energy.
It provides a once-in-a-lifetime deepdown thrill,
better beware and board as it approaches,
or it will be sure to explode.
A vigorous...vibrant write dear Fay as always....enchanting :))
And last night, as Summer in the States officially closed out, i had to watch"JAWS"....and now, today, i see this this poem with its accompanying Sea-Witch black 'n white....Timing izzz everything ! Premium poetics in full efflorescence... like i expected anything less avec vous! ~FjR ~
superb and original view of 'sea watching'.
A surfers dream wave - right at the end of your inky fingers Fay!!!!! Delightful! :) kath xxxxxx
Awesome piece my friend.Always a pleasure to read your magical poems.
wow i feel ive been on a wild ride love it fay
What a delight to read this !!! It will be sure to explode !!!??? I agree :-) Lovely write Fay.
Nothing quite like watching the sea as a storm rolls in. Terrific poem Fay!