Lines of fantasy drawn from the image of
Inside the Mind.
Buried In Breath.
Mesmeric whispers take leave of normality
And head for the place far below sound.
They lie very still in hypnotized silence
And half-awake in awesome anticipation
I enter the field, recognise signs and relax.
Somewhere buried in breath are well-springs
Streaming with freedom to listening ears.
I am floated along with them to deeper still
Places where Hope composes a symphony
Of much brighter future for earth to inherit.
Eternity's innocence then starts a vibration
Of joy as reality slowly begins to be played.
Untying beyondness I find a note of truth
That our present being is merely a state of
The soul, which is made of wholly different
Substance than that of our flesh and blood.
I marvelled that vision can be seen this way.
The whispers have ceased but only it seems
Evaporated into meanings of faint sounds.
Stored for our use they are buried in breath
By Love's timeless memory, and moreover
Still inviting, and ajar, is mind's exciting door .
you can write an encyclopaedia on whispers and life's phenomena ...each verse deserves praise ....Present being a state of soul , evaporated into meanings of faint sounds , eternity's innocence starts a vibration ...and the hypnotized silence ....wow is the word
Sounds like you've been practicing yoga he he! What a wonderful title! I wish I'd thought of it! It beautifully expresses that place beyond the beyond where the soul hangs suspended in timelessness. 'Eternity's innocence', 'Untying beyondness' and 'where Hope composes a symphony' are literary jewels that shine particularly brightly. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
this poem ponders explores introspects without that preachy ambiance....a touch of the esoteric ....a truly graceful verse :)
Interesting exploration of mind kindles further exploration to higher level of enjoyment!
grand fay a grand poem
A poetic and lyrical journey through spiritual labyrinths - thought-provoking and beautiful. :)
A truly wonderful piece
A woman Picasso that's what you are Fay.. always colorful and indulging in fantasies... ;)-Misty
My type of verse,missy....Abstract,esoteric, and shades of chimeric shibboleth ! Enjoyed it much,Ms. Fay ! ~ FjR ~
FAY , YOUR MIND IS FULL OF GREAT IMAGES , WHICH YOU USE IN YOUR VERSE , AND THANKFULLY SHARE WITH US ! -Raj
A magical flow of verse allowing me to tiptoe into a poetic paradise... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing