Come Night-time
I shyly wear modesty all of each day.
Dressed in decorum,
composure all smiles.
Unworded thinking all questions allay.
Winsomely charming,
good acting beguiles.
Come night-time I shrug off this fine veneer.
As passion meets passion
your amour blankets me.
With awesome abandon worn without fear,
Different perspectives
of me become free.
In realms of dreamtime unleashed I remain.
But tomorrow will see me in order again.
Scarlett Angel
Fay....this so made me smile...it's such a gorgeous piece...as always you have produced a lovely piece of work:):)
Fay....this so made me smile...it's such a gorgeous piece...as always you have produced a lovely piece of work:):)
wombat
Now if there is no taker yet for poem of the week.....this is it. A brilliant write. It's enough for Ian and I to wish we could write like a woman.
Now if there is no taker yet for poem of the week.....this is it. A brilliant write. It's enough for Ian and I to wish we could write like a woman.
john o'connell
AN ABSOLUTELY CHARMING WRITE! THANKS FOR SHARING AND FOR YOUR EARLY MORNING READ.
AN ABSOLUTELY CHARMING WRITE! THANKS FOR SHARING AND FOR YOUR EARLY MORNING READ.
carol
proper during day but oh those fdreams where u can be
proper during day but oh those fdreams where u can be
poeticpiers
hidden depths M'lady only revealed to the chosen one
hidden depths M'lady only revealed to the chosen one
Sandra Martyres
Super write...the daytime Fay a demure lady vs the night time Fay the unmasked lady...
Super write...the daytime Fay a demure lady vs the night time Fay the unmasked lady...
Frank Lambert
Nah, it's the night time that truly sees you in order... This is a fine verse, much to like about this one, great word choice and form for instance. But mostly, the wit behind the story you've crafted here.
Nah, it's the night time that truly sees you in order... This is a fine verse, much to like about this one, great word choice and form for instance. But mostly, the wit behind the story you've crafted here.
nights do that wonder to all of us ...dreams ...we all are dreams living under a night sky ...first ray of sun melts us all into the mould of reality ...we are back in order ..