Collision of Love

Much distraction hides
locked behind large doors
leading to unhappy tensions in life,
yet floating invitingly close,
the core
of contentment lies, framed,
not by rife
pleasure, but glowing
with destinys' light.

Beauty comes suddenly,
and strides the sky
nightly, searching the stars for love,
look aright
and we spy oceans of happiness nigh
our hearts.

Such two as us radiant stars
who, on course for destiny,
have collided and
transformed into one sublime union,
afar
we were lone,
but together drawn, now stand
timeless,
eternally shining as one.

When stars colliding unite,
love has begun.

Susan Jarvis
Exquisitely beautiful and so very special, and I just love the title, it showcases the wonderful words of this poem perfectly. :)

T A Ramesh
Nice beginning of love!

Leslie Alexis
ah.. that's a whole lot of loving. and i'm loving it.

Ken e Hall
Thou art starry eyed my fair maiden on love words which thou have great command of..It shows thou must have collided with a love star thy self....regards

Nikunj
this is beautiful as ever ..the core of contentment finds the destiny's light and finds the path , where it is guided by the winds , everything else falls in place as it fits the larger scheme of things ......wonderfully penned and passionately showcased to the advantage of readers...its a privilege to be reading this .....Wow , as always is the word...

 

poeticpiers
Supernova? super theme. Fusion of two into one

Sandra Martyres
When stars colliding unite, love has begun. A beautiful love poem Fay...the metaphor is perfectand exudes radiance....

Ency Bearis
nice collision, probably with sparks of radiance, nice poem

carol
stars collide such a lovely poem fay