Lovers
A silver nosepin shines on
the night's face, as stars
are picked up in a black net
and pinned across the sky.
A wrinkled mat on the sand
tells the honeyed tales that
whispers wore up their sleeves
under a shimmering bowl.
The time stands witness to
the mumuring echoes that
rose from the blue waves in
the swirling oceanic moments .
Some scented breaths hang
lose in the salty air that lines
the depth in the vibs ,eyes
sing the song that the shores love.
ritty patnaik
amazed at your skill at weaving this lovely poem.love and romance cascading over and over....like the waves eager to touch the sand.great write......ritty
amazed at your skill at weaving this lovely poem.love and romance cascading over and over....like the waves eager to touch the sand.great write......ritty
Sally Plumb
I enjoyed this piece, especially the last eight words.
I enjoyed this piece, especially the last eight words.
Karin Anderson
Stars and romance flood this poem Niks and your first stanza is a stunner. The wrinkled mat, whispers, murmurs , and scent linger beautifully within this love poem with all its breathtaking magic.
Stars and romance flood this poem Niks and your first stanza is a stunner. The wrinkled mat, whispers, murmurs , and scent linger beautifully within this love poem with all its breathtaking magic.
sridevi
Each mote of sand on the shore has a tale to tell... every wisp of breeze has a song to whisper and every shell echoes a different roar...this poem takes us on a quiete stroll along a moonlit beach :)
Each mote of sand on the shore has a tale to tell... every wisp of breeze has a song to whisper and every shell echoes a different roar...this poem takes us on a quiete stroll along a moonlit beach :)
Ron Peat
Niks I have to tell the last line here is priceless. "eyes sing the song that the shores love." The shores of anything wonder in wanderlust. a poet friend// RH Peat
Niks I have to tell the last line here is priceless. "eyes sing the song that the shores love." The shores of anything wonder in wanderlust. a poet friend// RH Peat
Sandra Martyres
Excellent work Nikunj peppered with lovely imagery... Many memorable lines too..."stars picked up in a black net and pinned across the sky"
Excellent work Nikunj peppered with lovely imagery... Many memorable lines too..."stars picked up in a black net and pinned across the sky"
premji premji
poetry written on sand......
poetry written on sand......
Fay Slimm
An awesome picture of love made on a beachmat - but written with imaginative so much shape and inspired imagery. This uses original and quite unique phrasing such as " a silver nosepin shines on the night's face" - - breathtaking - - first class work Niks.
An awesome picture of love made on a beachmat - but written with imaginative so much shape and inspired imagery. This uses original and quite unique phrasing such as " a silver nosepin shines on the night's face" - - breathtaking - - first class work Niks.
Oh my ! this is loaded with passion/ very very beautiful !