free verse styled writting. Not allways ryhming. Get use to it please. this is all true. and i need to express feelings.
I love you.
you hurt me.
I loved you
but you cant see.
Broken hearted as i cry
you dont wanna hear it.
You moved on
Im still broken
You took my heart
and wont give it back.
I love you.
you moved on.
She must be better
than my tries.
My attemps weren't good enough.
Not a kiss
not a hug.
I still say that its love.
I see you smile.
You see me cry.
You have no courage to even ask me why.
If you did i know what i would say...
I love you
I miss you
You dont care
You love her
and Dont see what Ive done
to try to get you back
to get your love
I love you
You dont care
Just sit there
and stare
at my tears.
You write from deep hurt and betrayal. Unfortunately, the most extreme emotions, joy or pain can help to create the best poems ever. Too bad this hurts as bad as it does. I can relate to your pain.....Nadine