Just my poetic imagination at work.
Implicit Dreams. (E)
Oh wanton Spirit of renegade flights , let me
experience virtual heights.
Do not abandon me, I feel weary of always being
alone, yet not loving freely.
You have helped me before, carried along by your
energy I felt his call, strongly.
He reached me that night, took me, and expressed
undying love with lips on my breast.
He fingered my soul with desire that sated impatient
needs which time had created.
Power of passion brought welcome release from
normality as sweet climax was reached.
May your magical force bring him once more to caress
me in virtual flesh, as before.
I believe in real love, but implicit dreams allow me to
realize just what that means.
When I meet surreal fate, feel it's hot skin, visionary
delights will be sure to begin.
So Spirit of Destiny, please hear my plea, for the present
bring him in essence to me.
I've read this a second time.It has the same impact.Wonderful!
Earthy and lyrical. If I could, I'd put in a word to Destiny on your behalf.
This brought on such pleasent feelings...or was it memories....I cannot remember. Lovely poem yes I could feel the passion, yes I could feel the love.
How beautifully erotic! Once again I feel the need to be daubed with a wet lettuce leaf. Phew! Thanks Fay.
Delicious!
my, my......(is all I'm saying....!)
Such a passionate poem, Fay, and expressed with the aplomb of a mature, wise soul.
And so say all of us and when he comes TAKE HIM Grand thoughts on paper...regards
we should be wearing a visual gadget on this one Fay... amazingly erotic and the desire is so intense... love it! ;)-Misty
I am amazed at your sensational imagination Fay.Very very wonderful and sensually lovely.Love it..
desire burns strong amazing write fay
I feel it's a typical sensual hymn...When I was reading this,I visualized tha whole story behind yur poem......In fact it seems like an erotic poem of Catullus....very profound writing....
Erotic, exquisite and romantic...the closing two lines touch the heart. Simply beautiful, Fay. :)
Amazing yearning so passionate, the desire with intense expressed well,great poem
this is really loaded with desires , that raise their heads from the depth of that dark belly that's formed in our minds and hearts..I like the idea if implicit dreams ...some verses really stand out here and add to the glitter of the poem ... 1. Impatient needs that time had created ..... wow . 2. welcome release from normality .....this expresses the state of mind of someone who's surrendered to the senses...and is swirling in passionate winds.... The poem rocks for me ....
a beautiful poem of longing and love , Fay...the style too is alluringly different in this poem. Love it.
I am left bereft of words a rare happening