When you are in love..you have to giveup all for your ..love
Translated from mazhaipen by kaivigar pazhani bharathi.
Love and Five Elements
When I glanced the Sky,
A shooting star
Lashed my eyes;
When I touched
The small Rain
Like a tree
A flash of Lightning
Pricked my finger.
As you dash me
Like a Wind,
I felt a turbulent river
For a minute in my vein
Which broke the Rock into smithereens;
I sustained all
As I saw you
In all Five Elements
Ezna Stephna
Wow great ......when i glance the picture of yours , a shooting looks lashed my eyes and make me smile ....you looking cool ...as well as your poem so romantic ..... haha. Poet what going on .....lol
Wow great ......when i glance the picture of yours , a shooting looks lashed my eyes and make me smile ....you looking cool ...as well as your poem so romantic ..... haha. Poet what going on .....lol
Philip
I think you have experience of all five elements and could teach us all a thing or two !!
I think you have experience of all five elements and could teach us all a thing or two !!
CWB
A romantic... you are. Christy
A romantic... you are. Christy
angelic
A very meaningful poem with wonderful imagery poet.
A very meaningful poem with wonderful imagery poet.
Simply Bono Razek
What a beautiful way to describe love! Thank you for your kind comment & yes he has my love all the way & then some ~smile~ Peace.
What a beautiful way to describe love! Thank you for your kind comment & yes he has my love all the way & then some ~smile~ Peace.
iverhyck
Beautiful. Konstantin.
Beautiful. Konstantin.
Sandra Martyres
A passionate and meaningful write.....Great penning
A passionate and meaningful write.....Great penning
Karin Anderson
A very meaningful poem with wonderful imagery. I find it passionate and romantic as well. As you define "you" as God and a lover it is written with much love and passion.
A very meaningful poem with wonderful imagery. I find it passionate and romantic as well. As you define "you" as God and a lover it is written with much love and passion.
anushmadhu
You"......GOD is LOVE..and LOVER too
You"......GOD is LOVE..and LOVER too
Munia Khan
Great write here Anush...Well, I think By 'You' you meant your beloved right ? Or God ??? I am confused a bit.Nice poem.
Great write here Anush...Well, I think By 'You' you meant your beloved right ? Or God ??? I am confused a bit.Nice poem.
sridevi
Even I am fascinated by the elements and this one is just brilliant !!!
Even I am fascinated by the elements and this one is just brilliant !!!
Priyanka Bhowmick
wonderful!!!
wonderful!!!
sule
i like this it caught me there nice work man
i like this it caught me there nice work man
Saraswati
wonderful love poem - puts me in mind of 'Give All To Love' R W Emerson
wonderful love poem - puts me in mind of 'Give All To Love' R W Emerson
ju
passion, balanced and powerful
passion, balanced and powerful
mistycalpoet
metal- she's a treasure (Gold) water- she's a nourishment wood- keeps u sheltered earth- protects and supports you fire- gives you light a well balanced ying-yang... what a love u got there Anushmadhu... ;)-Misty
metal- she's a treasure (Gold) water- she's a nourishment wood- keeps u sheltered earth- protects and supports you fire- gives you light a well balanced ying-yang... what a love u got there Anushmadhu... ;)-Misty
PrEmJi PrEmJi
and i see that sixth element here! your beautiful poetry!
and i see that sixth element here! your beautiful poetry!
Ezna Stephna
Excellent. it's really romantic poem that in all five elements you saw your love one.....
Excellent. it's really romantic poem that in all five elements you saw your love one.....
amazing....no words