the broken clock is better than the clock
which indicate usually wrong time
Freedom is not free
'Leave my needles free'
The clock at the top in tower
Begged the dove;
'You are symbol of freedom
But you encroched my heart
By constructing your nest
And tied my wheels of gears
My needles are crying with tears'
The dove dashed the clock
"But now you indicate right time
At least twice in a day ",
"Were you atleast once
In these years
In the name of freedom...?"
ritty patnaik
a thought provoking write on freedom......though freedom is a subject larger than life,it binds our hands too in certain aspects.are we really free we ask ourselves,and find we are bound to social norms and terms and rigid values,which we cannot wave out.i loved this write anush,as it leaves me to ponder over the matter !
a thought provoking write on freedom......though freedom is a subject larger than life,it binds our hands too in certain aspects.are we really free we ask ourselves,and find we are bound to social norms and terms and rigid values,which we cannot wave out.i loved this write anush,as it leaves me to ponder over the matter !
Bob Blackwell
When there is peace all around...all time stands still, to be free means not locked in the cycle of night and day but living always in present time.
When there is peace all around...all time stands still, to be free means not locked in the cycle of night and day but living always in present time.
Kannan G
A beautiful poem that proclaims that Freedom does not mean Passivity, it means Activity & Creativity. I loved the imagery used. Beautiful.
A beautiful poem that proclaims that Freedom does not mean Passivity, it means Activity & Creativity. I loved the imagery used. Beautiful.
Ezna Stephna
Great imagination on freedom ,well i believe strong freedom is free and enjoyable if you work with system ...good poem
Great imagination on freedom ,well i believe strong freedom is free and enjoyable if you work with system ...good poem
nimal dunuhinga
Exactly the truth my dear friend and I agree with your stopped clock,my salutation Anush!
Exactly the truth my dear friend and I agree with your stopped clock,my salutation Anush!
Munia Khan
Wonderful theme here...I love the way you put an end it...Lovely work for sure.
Wonderful theme here...I love the way you put an end it...Lovely work for sure.
sridevi
Great imagination out here !!!Kudos !!!
Great imagination out here !!!Kudos !!!
Ben Gieske
I agree, freedom is not free. You chose an excellent way to express your thoughts. You also provoke our thinking.
I agree, freedom is not free. You chose an excellent way to express your thoughts. You also provoke our thinking.
poeticpiers
fair comment I think new life is more important than measuring time
fair comment I think new life is more important than measuring time
Interesting end, leaves us with a murmuring hunger for thought, a begging dove, right time, high place and questions of what freedom is.. I got to let my soul sleep on this little song..Thank you.