Written a while back - -now reworked.

Enter Tonight. (E)

If thou be the spear that pierces my soul
Never will thrust seem so sweet.
The softest of places thou wouldst control
If thou enter, and never retreat.

Open the flood-gates to this waiting heart
The bolts to thy power will yield.
Love for thee oils them and no rust will part
Or bar thy way if thou makest a start.

Enter thy sword in this scabbard of mine.
Mine armour bides ready for thee.
Reside in this haven, love as divine
Thou wilt find with no other than me.

Sojourn within this palace my lord, white
Sheets of satin deck this my bed.
Thy lady awaits, so enter tonight.
For by the sweet morrow we shall be wed.

jinjahman
Lovely richly styled write Fay.

sridevi
Such a lovely romantic invitation Faye !!!Who can resiist such enchanting lines ...I totally agree with Karin ...

Ency Bearis
An aesthetic classic poem, such an excellent words and write

Karin Anderson
Fay, this is so elegant and lady- like and I am in awe of your old worldly words. I am sure you have captured the heart and soul of your Lord and happiness will abound. Simply enchanting...

mistycalpoet
yes feels like i was back on Camelot days.. very classic and classy! romantic poem that anyone would love to enter... ;)-Misty

sonetta
lovely, just lovely! .... (and that's with an English accent :)

Ron Peat
This has a Shakespearian sound to it. I must say, it is quite HOT, as well. Longing meets with the promise on tomorrow. This is looking forward to the sunrise for sure and making the most of it all. Nice write. A poet friend// RH Peat

Sandra Martyres
I agree with Keith..reminds me of Camelot - very well written Fay....Your talent shines out

Scarlett Angel
now this is one to touch the soul Fay....fabulous imagery and vivid emotion ...love it...

Keith Robinson
Sensuously Camelot-ish.