A Night Out ?
Hey Babe!
Let's go out for a midnight rave.
We can wine and dine now,
Then go out on the town.
Go to a dive
Where the music's alive.
Oh Dear!
When you put on that sexy gear
With hair long and curly,
I go out of my mind girl.
Wanton desire.
Always sets me on fire.
Whoah Hon.!
Just look what that talkin' has done.
Who needs food anyway.
It looks like we're in to stay
Put on a disc
A night out won't be missed.
Here Pet!
I didn't think you'd get upset.
You goin out on your own ?
Hey Hon. dont leave me alone.
She's gone I see.
And forgotten the key.
Bob Blackwell
From a male point of view, Fay this poem is full of fun, I would love to be the perfect stranger that you meet
From a male point of view, Fay this poem is full of fun, I would love to be the perfect stranger that you meet
kath
Superb! An immaculate write of piercing insight into the death of a taken for granted, boring, onesided relationship - I don't think your female protagonist will be coming climbing back through anyones window. I love this. It is truth expressed with all the beauty and subtlety of poetry Fay. Bookmarked as a must read for every female person alive! :) kath xxxx
Superb! An immaculate write of piercing insight into the death of a taken for granted, boring, onesided relationship - I don't think your female protagonist will be coming climbing back through anyones window. I love this. It is truth expressed with all the beauty and subtlety of poetry Fay. Bookmarked as a must read for every female person alive! :) kath xxxx
Scarlett Angel
oh Fay this one so made me laugh when I got to the last line....another brilliant piece from you ....(wonders if she managed to climb back in through a window):)
oh Fay this one so made me laugh when I got to the last line....another brilliant piece from you ....(wonders if she managed to climb back in through a window):)
Ken e Hall
Loved this and the great twist at the end with no key to get back in......Would not miss my Sat nite out for quids.....regards
Loved this and the great twist at the end with no key to get back in......Would not miss my Sat nite out for quids.....regards
Simply Bono Razek
great Fay!~ thanks for the smile~ your kind comment~peace
great Fay!~ thanks for the smile~ your kind comment~peace
Mark L. Berryann
Good clean fun is essential!
Good clean fun is essential!
Karin Anderson
Fantastic picture Fay! I love the dialogue. No doubt about you, writing in old English style and then with this modern vibe with such humor. Love it!
Fantastic picture Fay! I love the dialogue. No doubt about you, writing in old English style and then with this modern vibe with such humor. Love it!
Sandra Martyres
Nice one Fay...with a generous touch of humour and a neat lesson at the end..Like th picture too...
Nice one Fay...with a generous touch of humour and a neat lesson at the end..Like th picture too...
RAJ NANDY
Fay the photograph sets the mood for the poem , and at the end we do learn the lesson ! -Raj
Fay the photograph sets the mood for the poem , and at the end we do learn the lesson ! -Raj
this is fun to read ....she would definitely be gone , as the talking has done the final damage ...and who would bother about the key when the locks are lost ...