A cry from my greenhouse which is loaded
with unripened tomatoes, and still it rains.

Green Tomatoes by jeffmorg

Not a Blush.

Roundly raw
There they hang,
Virginal.
Still not a blush in sight,
But daily they grow and rapidly burgeon.

Oh where is that promised sun ?

Perkily plump
There they sit,
Curvaceous.
Smooth as a milk-maid's rump,
While maturest sweet juices stay earthed.

Oh where is that ripening sun ?

Gracefully greedy
There they drip,
Gluttonous.
Untinted, yet drinking in feed,
And heading for yet more Tomato Chutney.

Oh where is that wretched sun ?

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Nikunj
tomatoes ....I wish they knew that their beauty could be so well defined one day ....they would remain virgin all their lives ...
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Fay Slimm
That sounds a good alternative to green-tom. chutney Sonya - - thanks I will try it............. fried eh ? xxx Fay.
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sonetta
hope the sun comes soon in your part of the world... if not, why not try "fried green tomatoes?" i heard it's pretty good....
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Theresa Ann Moore
i would gladly share my sunshine with you... my tomatoes have been blushing for two weeks... delicious poem
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Leslie Alexis
this is abotu a tomato! you made the tomato the sweet fruit.
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Sandra Martyres
May the sunshine on your tomatoes Fay...a terrific write that really made me smile.....I am referring to your description of them - no the ripening problem
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Raj Arumugam
That's a brilliant poem, Fay. Just as brilliant as an award-winning ripe tomato! I'm eating this and BkMk-ing it.
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Bob Blackwell
Smooth as a milk -maids rump but not so pink I guess, I hope the sun shines on your bunch of bottoms soon
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RAJ NANDY
FAY , You will be suprised to know, that right now good old tomatoes are one of the costliest of vegetables in Delhi ! May the sun bless yours ! -Raj
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Philip
Oh Fay a plaintive cry ! Who said it would be easy...If it was none of us would need to buy them from M & S
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