Readers please Guess what is the word?
The missing 'word' in my poem
I was searching a' word'
Which escaped from
my poem,
At last I found the
'Word' in the terrace,
When it was sitting
with children and
Staring at your lips
at the time
of your tuition class
I realize only now,
The 'word' had not escaped
From my poem
But eloped with
Your Lips...!
ritty patnaik
read your poem after a long gap........i think this one is enchanting,and a fine poem.
read your poem after a long gap........i think this one is enchanting,and a fine poem.
aryaindia
Imaginative and sensual, this poem captivates.
Imaginative and sensual, this poem captivates.
PrEmJi PrEmJi
But eloped with Your Lips...! superb write anush...
But eloped with Your Lips...! superb write anush...
nimal dunuhinga
Real hidden gem!
Real hidden gem!
Debs
A very expressive poem!
A very expressive poem!
La Finita
Original, lovely. "I found the word in the terrace..." What a magic world.
Original, lovely. "I found the word in the terrace..." What a magic world.
Ezna Stephna
Lol , beautiful written with little love .....but its not on my lips ha-ha .......a great poem from your heart .smart and great poet. it was good your word escaped not your heart ...:))))))
Lol , beautiful written with little love .....but its not on my lips ha-ha .......a great poem from your heart .smart and great poet. it was good your word escaped not your heart ...:))))))
Ken e Hall
Funny how you can sit and write and from the blue out pops a gem as is this poem..very intriguing...regards
Funny how you can sit and write and from the blue out pops a gem as is this poem..very intriguing...regards
Ben Gieske
I love the picture you describe. Poetry is all about choosing expressive words and sometimes the word or words we leave out.
I love the picture you describe. Poetry is all about choosing expressive words and sometimes the word or words we leave out.
sule
gr8 love it
gr8 love it
Raj Arumugam
unique style and concept, anushmadhu
unique style and concept, anushmadhu
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
So Lovely...this expression of love through your poetry...your poem reminded me of my poem...(A Poem To Crawl Into) which I invite you to read. Peace and Love! Your words are beautiful! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
So Lovely...this expression of love through your poetry...your poem reminded me of my poem...(A Poem To Crawl Into) which I invite you to read. Peace and Love! Your words are beautiful! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
roeboy
I realize only now, The 'word' was not escaped From my poem But eloped with Your Lips...! that's beautiful really love it, thou you should change "was not" to "had not" Regards
I realize only now, The 'word' was not escaped From my poem But eloped with Your Lips...! that's beautiful really love it, thou you should change "was not" to "had not" Regards
Priyanka Bhowmick
wow dat ws a wonderful piece.. enjoyed the idea of tuition class :D
wow dat ws a wonderful piece.. enjoyed the idea of tuition class :D
jadia4708au
You have really missed She put her hand around and teased She just whispered something in ear and released A sigh of long relief and felt really displeas
You have really missed She put her hand around and teased She just whispered something in ear and released A sigh of long relief and felt really displeas
Gita Ashok
A cleverly penned write!
A cleverly penned write!
wojja fink
a nice way of not saying it when someone thinks it for you...beyond words ...ingenious...
a nice way of not saying it when someone thinks it for you...beyond words ...ingenious...
Ezna Stephna
Wonderful.. you need key and locker to lock it tight so word wont eloped again and again ....very smart poet keep writing with feeling of love,the test spell is locked.it will never fail nor it eloped ....thank you for sharing
Wonderful.. you need key and locker to lock it tight so word wont eloped again and again ....very smart poet keep writing with feeling of love,the test spell is locked.it will never fail nor it eloped ....thank you for sharing
I like the background picture you paint of words not standing still, but moving in all directtions all the time. And when they sometimes collide they form gems of atristry such as this poem. Congratulations.