Forever Ours.
There is a spacious airy
Place forever ours.
No-one can take away rare
Love like we possess, hours
Of daily discipline keeps
Us duty bound, yet
Night is when we sense release.
Dreams help us forget
The fight, heart can speak to heart.
When dark arrives, I run
To thoughts of you, parting
Comes when dawn lights sky,
But by then we have dwelt in
Paradise, and with our
Passion stilled, I bask within
The afterglow, feeling power
Beyond the norm as all night through
Bliss had bound me close to you.
Simply Bono Razek
Hi Fay, a so very romantic write/beautiful softly "lit"words,thank you for your lovely comment/Peace.
Hi Fay, a so very romantic write/beautiful softly "lit"words,thank you for your lovely comment/Peace.
Nikunj
this one has shades of deeper meanings , like in a sufi poem. The poem is about romance and love which can also be seen to being offered to that great lover who is beyond life and earth ...as usual a great stuff , that's a privilege to read thru ....
this one has shades of deeper meanings , like in a sufi poem. The poem is about romance and love which can also be seen to being offered to that great lover who is beyond life and earth ...as usual a great stuff , that's a privilege to read thru ....
mistycalpoet
Love is a portion of the soul itself, and it is of the same nature as the celestial breathing of the atmosphere of paradise. Paradise is open to all kind hearts. .. lovely write Fay.. ;)- Misty.
Love is a portion of the soul itself, and it is of the same nature as the celestial breathing of the atmosphere of paradise. Paradise is open to all kind hearts. .. lovely write Fay.. ;)- Misty.
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Romantic, warming and smooth as a springfall into a riverbed Fay...you da Gal ! FjR
Romantic, warming and smooth as a springfall into a riverbed Fay...you da Gal ! FjR
Bob Blackwell
Beautiful words make up lovely lines of poetry, the love comes through so strongly
Beautiful words make up lovely lines of poetry, the love comes through so strongly
Karin Anderson
Such stunning lines here Fay and the end rhyming couplet rounds the poem off lovingly. Once more, I look at the picture you have chosen when I read 'I bask within the afterglow'.
Such stunning lines here Fay and the end rhyming couplet rounds the poem off lovingly. Once more, I look at the picture you have chosen when I read 'I bask within the afterglow'.
Scarlett Angel
Beautiful flowing piece Fay ...as always the picture you create for the reader is so vivid ...lovely read.
Beautiful flowing piece Fay ...as always the picture you create for the reader is so vivid ...lovely read.
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Where do you come up with these digitals ? Awesome, one & all!!! Good thing you are the Class "A" scribe that you be....As it be your writing that is the only supersedor to these Pix ! lol! ~F j R ~
Where do you come up with these digitals ? Awesome, one & all!!! Good thing you are the Class "A" scribe that you be....As it be your writing that is the only supersedor to these Pix ! lol! ~F j R ~
With loved ones even in the hell you feel like paradise Fay your classical painting I hang in my lonely attic.