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Simply Bono Razek very clever write indeed...as the saying goes--" beauty is in the eyes of the beholder"...great piece..
sridevi A wise man does not need lights to look at his beautiful wife....and a beautiful wife requires all the lights to look at her wise man...LOL!!!:)))loved the clever play of words here :)
Ezna Stephna beauty is not found in lights or darkness but beauty itself is found in love.A wise man will never look for beauty as he is wise enough to feel the beauty of his wife .....Beauty is true love of human being .thank you it is a very tricky poem .... wise man lol :)))))))
anushmadhu I agree with your comment...
i was also trying to put the same among the readers...
Beauty exists in process of loving.... not in the light or physical appearance of anybody.....
thanks for your wonderful & emotional comment in poetry form...really i am proud of your comment.sir.
sincerely
anushmadhu
jadia4708au "An eyes to see"
He closes eyes at the time of demise
As he has broken the promise
Now there won't be any sunrise
The departure is all of sudden with surprise
A the beauty lies with man's eyes
The question doesn't rise with any Why
The wife is always beautiful in life
Only you have to walk on the edge of knife
She is light to herself
So deep and shallow like sea shelf
You may think wise to keep always quiet
The course is yet to be decided and set
Love is to be seen and watched
Legs to be spread and not stretched
Prize is to be won and glimpses to be caught
Wisdom is to prevail and company is to be sought
You may think she is wise and beautiful
Others may think it is unwise and deceitful
She got to be perfect and faithful
Always dedicated and simply truthful
If you are wise you may see only these two
Things may go wrong and not prove true
You have to sail through stormy season
You must have eyes to see her beauty with reasons
Light or dark may not prove contrary
It is very essential and necessary
Think it beautifully and love to merry
Real beauty in eyes you only have to carry
anushmadhu Pls dont mistake me for this poem...good & bad is in our minds...not with others..
mistycalpoet A very cunning words Anushmadhu... but beauty comes within... ;)-Misty
John Weber You know how to turn an observation into humor, without doubt. Laughs always possess a kernel of truth! A wise eye guides your pen!
very clever write indeed...as the saying goes--" beauty is in the eyes of the beholder"...great piece..