Lost

mental stagnation
amalgamated with
a strange feeling
of being lonely
lots of thoughts enter n exit
like a funeral of an immortal
a strange feeling
of being lost in time
feeling as if
the whole world's staring at me
the strange feeling of being in zero gravity
am i in a dream .. or am i in heaven
A complete physical and mental drought
a gleam waiting to trigger
the mind to generate an impulse
The jolt that would revive me back to sanity
will i be provoked ....



Ojaswi Machiraju
4th August 2010
01.12 AM

 

ojaswim
Thnx..!! :)

Sandra Martyres
You portray very vividly "the strange feeling of being in zero gravity" that many sensitive people especially poets often encounter...great work Ojaswi!!

indira
this is like going through an abstract painting...it has very engorssing imagery...very difficult state of mind that you presented with great ease! keep it up, young man...