Diamond Dance.

Atop the lake today splayed a dancing net
of flickering
sparkly bright gems,
the sun and breeze playing duet, I stood
entranced
as water teemed alive.

Light, having fun with liquid glass, created
diamond gleams.

Amid such jiving mass, with frenetic
performance
this dance was supreme,
in themed revue, with jewel-studded cast.

Stars let loose brilliant glitter
in the fastest fling.

With million winking movements
quick silver
flashed with gold,
and for a while the zinging air went wild
around this speed-display,
willed by cosmic joy.

Then breezes died, the sun
went into hiding, and the dance was done.

Elsie
Hi Fay the imagery in this poem is really good, felt I was there viewing it first hand, well done.

Karin Anderson
How gloriously alive this stunning poem is. The dancing is so alive and vibrant and the poem builds up to a fabulous joy you create. I am determined not to believe 'the dance was done' as I need to dream about it tonight.....

Susan Jarvis
A shimmering delight of a write. I am especially drawn to; 'Light, having fun with liquid glass, created diamond gleams' - simply beautiful. :)

Sandra Martyres
A truly glittering write Fay.......dancing diamonds on a lake with the sun and breeze playing duet....

Ency Bearis
A brilliant thoughts and glittering image write.

T A Ramesh
Yes, I too have seen sparkling diamonds on the waves of sea under the Sunlight! Those dancing diamonds are indeed wonderful to see!

Scarlett Angel
such a beautiful scene you paint here Fay ...words image perfect ...made me feel I was watching.

Kerry O'Connor
A zinging good write! Love the dance of light.

carol
i can envision the dance of jewels

RAJ NANDY
FAY , YOUR POEM ALONG WITH THE DAZZLING IMAGE - HAS CREATED A DIAMOND-STUDDED POEM ! -Raj