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I maybe a poet

whose heart is filled

with much sentiments

enthused by the influx

of thoughts from my mind

yet how can I convey it

in truest poetic form

when I can't construct

it in most subtle way

in the language of poetry?



I maybe a poet

who write poems

the way as I feel

those innate thoughts

and sentiments within

this soul of sensitivities

stimulated by emotions

triggered by stimuli

both intrinsic and extrinsic

inspirations bad and good



I maybe a poet

whose compositions

are raw and imperfect

yet through publication

in various poetic sites

have been criticized

in constructive manner

as varied comments compiled

by co-poets and poetess

which incured inspiration

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Fay Slimm
Only poetry teaches poetry said a great master to me one day - - and true as that is we also need support which this verse intimates... well written Marvin.
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wojja fink
writing poetry teaches poetry, the critics talk amongst themselves....write on, the earth is your paper, the heavens your ink....
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cjkrieger
One may be a poet... you are such a poet!
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