haiku

in bed

Wake up icy cold.
My lover's toe brushes on me.
I may be lonely.

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erik99
There is much to think about in this short, rather sad poem, particularly the slightly puzzling last line, but poetry that makes you think is the best sort.
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welshpoet (Chris Smith)
Good Haiku, may you never be lonely
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Nikunj
meandering thoughts and feelings in here ...good one
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