having fun doesn't require much....just you and me and.....

Elemental Fun

you be air
i be water
let's make bubbles!

you be water
i be fire
let's make steam!

you be fire
i be air
let's have fun and
burn everything!!!


© 2010 Sonya Florentino


photo by G & A Scholiers
http://www.sxc.hu/photo/825627

heterodynemind
I think I remember this delicious bit of wordplay. ;)

Gan Chennai
You be Writer, I be Reader for Ever.

Raj Arumugam
pure fun, pure verse

john o'connell
playful with humour. thanks kind regards, john

Alison Cassidy
A wild and wacky poem, filled with light, laughter and love. Joy unbounded. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Susan Jarvis
The naked flame and billowing bubbles of sheer pleasure...I'm likin' this stripped bare fun; it makes me want to join in. :)

Mike
This is a perfect call to life...

Shashendra Amalshan
LOL.... Great poem to lift up my spirits Sonya, Nice lol

Ency Bearis
nice creativity and clever write...i like this poem

Munia Khan
And I love this airy, watery, burning fun so much....Wonderful idea n superb creativity.

Sandra Martyres
Super write Sonya.. exuding energy.. I like it very much

carol
lol sonetta love this

heterodynemind
Oh Sonya, I have missed your irrepressible poetry!! This is a favorite for ALL TIME. ;)

Kerry O'Connor
Such energy - it sizzles on every line, sonetta.