An afternoon on the beach.

234/365 Ahhh, sunbathing on the beach. by -mrsraggle-

Heat.

Fierce penetration, scintillating heat,
Ungently infuses my skin fast achieving
Toned browns, the sun, seeing chances, heaves
Away adulterating cloud-screen stealthily
Trying to cover the wall to wall blue
And melts it away, then pours down shining
Warmth on my today's beached body, too true
I must not stay long with the feel of the brine
Burning my nakedness - aahh but infiltration
Of such sensuous pleasure well satiates.

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user imageFrank Lambert
Ah, this is just where I'll be tomorrow, on the beach, but under a shade...

user imageLinda Winchell
Hope you used SPF 15! LOL God Bless

user imageJayaruwan
oh well, you get enough of the sun throughout the year when you live right under the equator lol loved it :)

user imageScarlett Angel
fabulous imagery here Fay ....making this a beautiful poem to read ...:)

user imageEncy Bearis
a wonderful influence of summer, hot and sensous

user imageJoAnn McGrath
that first line leads me away from the beach :O)

user imagecarol
nakedness under the sun sensuous indeed

user imagestella
the sun makes us feel so wonderful.....i am warmed reading your poem :o)

user imageT A Ramesh
Sun bath is okay for a short time but not long because ultra violet ray may cause skin problem!

user imageMike
Wow... this sensual session of sun soaked sweet verse is aptly named...

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