This Morning.
I saw him this morning,
exulting in the dawning light.
A half-grown, somewhat tame
well-fed blackbird
Shaking off the rest of his night.
I saw him airborne,
warbling on his morning flight.
A wide-winged, full-throated
ardent songbird
Addressing day is a rare delight.
Shashendra Amalshan
Nice one Fay, I loved your ardent songbird. Very nice.
Nice one Fay, I loved your ardent songbird. Very nice.
Kerry O'Connor
This poem has taken flight in my imagination, Fay.
This poem has taken flight in my imagination, Fay.
sonetta
i can never wake up early enough...so thank you for letting me hear him and see him....!
i can never wake up early enough...so thank you for letting me hear him and see him....!
heterodynemind
I saw him too. Thanks for taking me along with you. :)
I saw him too. Thanks for taking me along with you. :)
Karin Anderson
Splendid Fay. You must be an early riser. I love 'shaking off the rest of his night'. You have captured this songbird's charm so vividly.
Splendid Fay. You must be an early riser. I love 'shaking off the rest of his night'. You have captured this songbird's charm so vividly.
premji premji
lovely write
lovely write
robyn selters
Superb...there is nothing quite like the song of a blackbird. Beautifully crafted.
Superb...there is nothing quite like the song of a blackbird. Beautifully crafted.
Philip
I saw him too Fay...Was he the same one sent to charm a Poet
I saw him too Fay...Was he the same one sent to charm a Poet
RAJ NANDY
FAY , your poem to is a rare delight ! -Raj
FAY , your poem to is a rare delight ! -Raj
carol
morning lovely poem fay a songbird is a delighful beginning
morning lovely poem fay a songbird is a delighful beginning
As a fellow morning person I'm right there with you Fay. Nice one