Night scape
Once more…
I become the night’s melting heartbeat
flowing through her tears.
echoing her hushed footsteps…
…marching the sleepless, dark corridors
strewn with dreamless stars
Once more
I become the night’s throbbing pulse
Fading with her shadows
on flickering walls
aching to to hold a
thread of her scented mists
Once more
I become the night’s wings... craving
to kiss the raga hiding behind dawn’s smiles
born on the crimson Eastern sky
Once more
I become the night’s page fluttering
in the seamless breezes
of an endless tale.
28th July 2010
Wee hours.
Punsara
You have used very mystical writing style to beautify yur poem,but it captures our alacrity to enjoy yur work....I love this....!
You have used very mystical writing style to beautify yur poem,but it captures our alacrity to enjoy yur work....I love this....!
robyn selters
Wow! Lovely seamless write. The last stanza is especially beautifully penned.
Wow! Lovely seamless write. The last stanza is especially beautifully penned.
Fay Slimm
Sri this floats on gauzy phrases of night like a dream. Lovely.
Sri this floats on gauzy phrases of night like a dream. Lovely.
Sandra Martyres
I agree with Raj...a beautiful lyrical and mystical and in many ways very touching write too, excellent poem Bookmarked
I agree with Raj...a beautiful lyrical and mystical and in many ways very touching write too, excellent poem Bookmarked
RAJ NANDY
SRI, I LOVED THE IMAGERY AND YOUR LYRICAL VERSE ! -Raj
SRI, I LOVED THE IMAGERY AND YOUR LYRICAL VERSE ! -Raj
Raj Arumugam
always lyrical, mystical - and moving, sridevi
always lyrical, mystical - and moving, sridevi
carol
exceptional words lovely
exceptional words lovely
sonetta
if insomnia make you write poetry as beautiful as this, it can't be a bad thing...!
if insomnia make you write poetry as beautiful as this, it can't be a bad thing...!
Once more you have posted a poem written with so much honesty and heart. You make the reader move with your lines.Those last few lines are very beautifully penned. Nice to read Sri.