Sweet Freedom.

Not with great thought conceived by the mind
Can we, sweeter freedom lastingly find.
Only with heart can mind's link be broken,
So that doors once closed can now swing open.

Vibrant
new life
is ecstasy
felt in Now,
in the moment,
which once dwelt
within hearts by right,
yet now, lost to our sight,
and, fairly often neglected,
mis-used and grown blighted,
is still part of permanent beauty,
attained by piercing the soul at root.

Understanding an ease with Self, starting
With goals which discover the present stark
Momentary awareness, not future or past
But Now, will reveal sweet freedom at last.

T A Ramesh
Poets will certainly know how enjoy this sweet freedom more than others and inspire like you do here!

Kerry O'Connor
Wonderful idea, brought to skillful fruition with your pen.

JoAnn McGrath
wise words of wisdom from a wise sage :O)

Philip Kirkland
Original form and very true!

magnolia
The here and now Fay, well said, and beautifully written. Maggie x

Munia Khan
I am amazed at the words ....Vibrant new life is ecstasy felt in Now, in the moment, which once dwelt within hearts by right.....A wonderful write Fay.Love the form n title as well.

Sandra Martyres
Love the form you have used Fay...Living in the present ..in the here and now is truly tasting sweet freedom. A very well writtten piece Fay...

carol
excellent fay indeed this is sweeet freedom

Shashendra Amalshan
Hmmm, Very inspirational poem Fay. I guess you are inspired by the great poet Bob Blackwell himself. Nice philosophy Fay, good to read.