Unfinished Music

Your sweet golden notes penetrate my soul.
They strike life's tone-deaf bowl
of plaintive tunes, and replay
inaudible sounds by injecting a warm dose
of chords as an amorous goal.

Let who will condemn, we sing life our way.
Yet bittersweet, but one day
this chorus of repeated
yearning will vocalise loudly and relay
unfinished music for life to play.

When fleshed, ardent desire will be sated.
Destiny's fire will have abated
off-beat keys, complete and bonded
forever we will harmonise then, created
the better for having waited.

Meggie Gultiano
this is a heavenly piece..

Cat
I can't sing very well at all but I like to let the songs out sometime in praise, I too will welcome when that heavenly song is sung! Lovely, Cat

premji premji
lovely poem...lovey rhyming.......thanks for sharing...

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
I love the deep harmonic flow of this poetic treasure...'tis wonderful! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Mike
So beautiful and upbeat, I wonder why I feel a sadness here...

Patrick McFarland
Well written and full of timeless wisdom. Reads like one of the classics...

Karin Anderson
Glorious poetry Fay, as music and poetry go are part of each other. A profound poem where destiny and harmony will be done. Your rhyme scheme os very effective too!

RAJ NANDY
Truly lifes music goes on unbated ! "When fleshed , our ardent desire will be sated." A great philosophical & poetic expression well expressed ! -Raj

Jayaruwan
a pleasure to read. its filled with really strong words. - Jay -

robertchoward
Strongly focused with great rhythm and sense of color.