snapshorts 8

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two drops
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three drops
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one drop
no drop
no drop
no drop


nothing
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four drops
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one drop
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one drop
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two drops
of blood.


up above,
a crow flew
into the belly
of the monsoon,
and gored it.

Published July 20, 2010 Write a comment
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Don
Interesting.... I like it.
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rema renjini nair
well a neat twist in the tale , neat snapshort
 
Mark L. Berryann
That's a sick poem that I liked!
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Kerry O'Connor
You're really on a roll with these innovative snapshorts, Pat. From the visually literal to the figurative in one 'fowl' swoop.
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sridevi
This is maha innovative..:))
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