Surreally Absurd.

Seeing so far, where no sunlight reaches,
I travel black clouds to assess further place.
Waves of commitment roll forward to beach
Me in deserts yet leave me without any space,
Racing to finish, insane wings of brainstorm
Face me with relief, but I still choose desire.
Wide open my eyes as I see reason dawning,
Defying my senses, I reach for your fire.
Where heat will entwine me, surreally absurd,
You make me alive by your superfine word.

William Bonilla
I liked this piece most of all how it closed....peace be with you William

Nikunj
that's what passions do , they rule the senses when traditional laws fail to guide the self , heart and the mind ......every step taken in such manner is a journey in itself .....no matter how absurd or surreal it is ..life is where the desires go ....

Dr.subhendu kar
Defying my senses, I reach for your fire.....great write...

Karin Anderson
Fire passion and imagery at its finest in this stunning poem Fay and the tite so apt and the picture captures the mood so vividly. It takes me beyond the realm of reason.

Romeo Della Valle
When beauty and passion converge on someone's life, a reservoir of happiness is created! Excellent write, Fay, thanks for sharing, Love and Peace...

carol
fay your a beautifful romantic that should live by the sea

 

M. Carter Kirk
"Superfine"... and you are "superfly" yet again a triumph!

Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Heat & Words...perrrfect together, in love, life and mind ! I'm likin' this much,Fay ! ~FjR~

Susan Jarvis
A passionate and tempestuous relationship with words...the best kind there is, Fay. Great write! :)