What You Left.
In one of its corners there sits
in my heart
A stored-away shelf, a most secretive part.
No-one but myself is allowed
there to find
its most valued gem is what you left behind.
Shashendra Amalshan
Very cleverly expressed Fay. I found this poem quite unique, something different from you. Having said that by writing this poem, you have shared the route to that secretive place in your heart with all of us here in poetfreak lol.. so coooll.. loved this one Fay.
Very cleverly expressed Fay. I found this poem quite unique, something different from you. Having said that by writing this poem, you have shared the route to that secretive place in your heart with all of us here in poetfreak lol.. so coooll.. loved this one Fay.
carol
keep it safe fay
keep it safe fay
andrasidan
This was good! And I like the painting. Yours?
This was good! And I like the painting. Yours?
Sandra Martyres
A wistful write Fay and the picture you have posted just sets the tone of the piece....
A wistful write Fay and the picture you have posted just sets the tone of the piece....
A very poignant poem. So much can be left behind that is valued, and so much and just be left unsaid, unanswered, and overwhelming us with regret... I thought your poem was lovely. Thank you for using my Big Heart of Art to illustrate it. I have to examine this site some more. Might be fun to add some of my stuff... Cheers! QThomasBower