snapshorts 5

clouds are
fluffy ice cream
scoops
he must have
thought,
because right after
the afternoon storm,
the sun came out
and gobbled
away the monsoon.

Published July 17, 2010 Write a comment
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ShyWolf
Great snapshort of a summers day and fluffy icecream scoops
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Kerry O'Connor
Another hungry sun - loving it!
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rema renjini nair
absolutely chaste and smart poetry
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Sandra Martyres
Love this shapshort of a tale...the sun gobbling up the ice-cream clouds..not sure however that the farmers with share your enthusiasm!!!!
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Fay Slimm
No wonder the sun is happily round !! - - ice-creamy dream of a piece .
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sridevi
was it butterscotch ???with a generous sprinkling of nuts???I would love that:)))
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Susan Jarvis
Lip smackingly delicious - I'm lovin' those 'fluffy i scream scoops' ;)
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