snapshorts 4
sky became black
sun turned off light
earth went dull dark
rain came slinging
wind lashed howling
windows kept banging
flattened grass gulped
fattened leaves quivered
fractured branches drooped
one yuppie cursed
one puppy whimpered
one mummy waited...
with an awesome
yellow umbrella.
Kerry O'Connor
This is brilliantly evocative of sounds, sights and feelings. Great work Pat.
This is brilliantly evocative of sounds, sights and feelings. Great work Pat.
Susan Jarvis
I love the vivid flashes of imagery in these snapshorts - I especially like; 'flattened grass gulped / fattened leaves quivered' as well as that 'awesome yellow umbrella' - huge fun! :)
I love the vivid flashes of imagery in these snapshorts - I especially like; 'flattened grass gulped / fattened leaves quivered' as well as that 'awesome yellow umbrella' - huge fun! :)
humanwoman
Excellent syllabic decision for a poem
Excellent syllabic decision for a poem
storms fury caught in flashlight, imagery awesome and reminds me I have misplaced my umbrella