snapshorts 3

from deep
within the gray
lumpy face
of the skies,
a jolly sunbeam
pierced through,
and poked
haughty miss rain
in the eye,
and she
began to cry.

Published July 16, 2010 Write a comment
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ShyWolf
Your snapshorts quite unique, and enjoyable
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Don
I am smiling. Enjoyable.
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Kerry O'Connor
Such humorous use of personification.
 
humanwoman
absolutely photographic
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sridevi
woowww!!!I am beginning to love these snapshorts PAt.
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Sandra Martyres
Love your snapshorts...they get cheekier by the day...great write
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