Lake Tikitapu (The Blue Lake) Bay of Plenty, NZ by geoff-inOz

Nothing Is Lacking.

Where shall we fly to today mi amore' ?
Winter will pass with its icy goodbyes.
Seasonless travellers need no rewarding
Fine dawn awaits so let's board the blue skies.

Windowpanes misting mean drifts of poor contact
Which may delay us, but warmth from the sun
Will hear our intentions, nothing is lacking
As we wait for the pace desire has begun.

So where shall we head for today mi amore' ?
The folds in our dreams are longing to spread.
As shells of past wishes split open we're praying
That this will be our time, stars have been read,
And muse wants to steer us to fate's ready bed.

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Published 2010/07/15, write a comment

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Richard Jarboe
the flip side to nothing is everything and your poem offers it up generously. good work, ric

user imageBob Blackwell
Sounds perfect to me Fay just move on to the next magic moment together. Lovely words

RAJ NANDY
FAY, This lyrical write of yours should be put to verse , and the recorded version played during the candel light dinner when two bodies sway as one - in a magical trance/dance ! -Raj

user imagesonetta
with love, any destination is beautiful...!

user imageMark L. Berryann
Ah, to be one with the world around us and ready for anything!

user imageSusan Jarvis
Simply beautiful, Fay, and I love the subtle grace of the rhyme and rhythm - wonderful. :)

user imageT A Ramesh
Mi amore it is very fine!

user imagecarol
fay noone says it like you so romantic

user imageLinda Winchell
Take me with you? Sounds beautiful and so peacful. God Bless you and the gift God has blessed you with my Dear woman. Linda

user imageMike
Fay... this is just beautiful... it's a trip to heaven...

user imageScarlett Angel
Oh I love the whole idea of this poem Fay...so beautifully put in your unique words:)

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