Outside of Time.
Pasts were forgotten.
They were strangers no more
To each other,
But unknown now to themselves.
They stood in awe
Of what they knew had begun.
Now outside of time,
They learnt nothing but new.
Their sense became numb.
They realised fate meant
To open love's toll-gate,
So they became one.
Beyond time's bounds
Begins destiny's chance
And there they waited
For their reality.
Susan Jarvis
Full of heartfelt wisdom and beauty...the closing verse draws the entire poem together perfectly. :)
Full of heartfelt wisdom and beauty...the closing verse draws the entire poem together perfectly. :)
Kate Sparrow
"love's toll gate" - beautiful! How well I know this eerie feeling! Very well put Fay! Pretty little verse!
"love's toll gate" - beautiful! How well I know this eerie feeling! Very well put Fay! Pretty little verse!
Scarlett Angel
Exceptional piece Fay....as always you capture the reader and draw them to the final lines...like this a whole lot :)
Exceptional piece Fay....as always you capture the reader and draw them to the final lines...like this a whole lot :)
Sandra Martyres
A magical write about the reality love and destiny....love the line - "They realised fate meant To open love's toll-gate"
A magical write about the reality love and destiny....love the line - "They realised fate meant To open love's toll-gate"
Mark L. Berryann
That magical moment when guards are let down and hearts are reopened to dream of the future!
That magical moment when guards are let down and hearts are reopened to dream of the future!
Munia Khan
All my senses have become numb now Fay:-) even before reading the last 2 stanzas!!! What an amazing poetic time machine with the gate of love you have created here. Hats off to this brilliant work my dear one.
All my senses have become numb now Fay:-) even before reading the last 2 stanzas!!! What an amazing poetic time machine with the gate of love you have created here. Hats off to this brilliant work my dear one.
RAJ NANDY
FAY , IT IS AN INTERESTING CONCEPT ! OUTSIDE OF TIME - BEYOND THE FOURTH DIMENSION A DIFFERENT REALITY AWAITS PERHAPS BODERING ON ETERNITY ! IT HAS BEEN PROVED BY SCIENTISTS THROUGH COMPLEX EQUATIONS , ONCE THE SPEED OF LIGHT IS REACHED (THEORITICALLY) , TIME COMES TO A HALT !AND IF THE SPEED OF LIGHT IS CROSSED , TIME STARTS TO FLOW BACKWARDS ! IN THE FAMOUS ''TWIN PARADOX'' , THE TWIN TRAVELLING OUT IN SPACE NEAR THE SPEED OF LIGHT , REMAINS YOUNG AND LOOKS BRIGHT ! WHEN HE RETURN HE FINDS , HIS TWIN BROTHER HAD GROWN OLD ON EARTH WHOM HE COULD NOT RECOGNISE ! THANKS FAY FOR SHARING THIS POEM !
FAY , IT IS AN INTERESTING CONCEPT ! OUTSIDE OF TIME - BEYOND THE FOURTH DIMENSION A DIFFERENT REALITY AWAITS PERHAPS BODERING ON ETERNITY ! IT HAS BEEN PROVED BY SCIENTISTS THROUGH COMPLEX EQUATIONS , ONCE THE SPEED OF LIGHT IS REACHED (THEORITICALLY) , TIME COMES TO A HALT !AND IF THE SPEED OF LIGHT IS CROSSED , TIME STARTS TO FLOW BACKWARDS ! IN THE FAMOUS ''TWIN PARADOX'' , THE TWIN TRAVELLING OUT IN SPACE NEAR THE SPEED OF LIGHT , REMAINS YOUNG AND LOOKS BRIGHT ! WHEN HE RETURN HE FINDS , HIS TWIN BROTHER HAD GROWN OLD ON EARTH WHOM HE COULD NOT RECOGNISE ! THANKS FAY FOR SHARING THIS POEM !
I can relate to the romance and achronistic nature of this beautiful poem.