So Near Real.

Somewhere we sit beside a lake.
Bright starry trail lights waking skies.
I stretch to gaze and see dawn break.
We kiss, you laugh at my surprise.
Somewhere we sit beside a lake.

We walk a headland at sometime.
Grass wilts summer-seared with heat.
I sense your heart fold into mine
As we make love in mossed retreat.
We walk a headland at sometime.

Somehow we know the time of day
When call propels us to a space
Familiar need comes into play
I know, like me, you too make haste.
Somehow we know the time of day.

The feel of place is so near real.
We often meet in dreamtime mist.
The nectar taste of lover's meal
Leaves skin that knows it has been kissed.
The feel of place is so near real.

john o'connell
really like this marvellous poem with a delightful use of repetition. regards, john

Jayaruwan
enjoyed very much :) - Jay -

magnolia
Romance at it's best, lovely read. Maggie x

Ency Bearis
A lovely dream so with your poem

Nikunj
this is so tangible , so real , so stimulating to read and so much poetically palpable , its a treat to eye and food for poetic appetite ....good one

Karin Anderson
Simply enchanting Fay and you bring nature and poetical structure to bring romance and 'almost real' desire to the reader. Love the rhyme too!

Bob Blackwell
It is good to reflect and dream of times gone by because as you say they can be 'so near real.'' Sweet dreams Fay!

carol
such a lovely picture you paint

 

poeticpiers
dreaming is often better than reality

RAJ NANDY
YOUR POETIC AND LYRICAL DESCRIPTION PAINTS A VIVID PICTURE TO MAKE IT APPEAR REAL ! -Raj

sridevi
lovely...floating on the clouds of romance!!!!